Brylie 28/7/16 Ice Age five

One cloudy Friday, Porter and I wanted to watch different movies.

Porter wanted to watch Ice Age Five   I wanted to watch the BFG. But we were not allowed too because Waylon was with us. Because it could scare him.

We had to watch Ice Age Five. We first had to pick up Sabriye and Nia. They were at our cousin's house because Mum was in Hawaii. We were like a pack of wild pigs ready to go to the movies. We past some shops. Finally we were at the Base.   We took off our seat belts. I was  excited Havana brought some money because Havana wanted to buy some make up. Dad wanted to buy something for Mum because Mum  was coming back home on Friday. I told Havana a little lie because I  could not wait. I told her come on Havana were going now’ she walked to Dad said to why? Do we have to go now. We gave the our tickets so we could go into the Movie. We had seven people with us. The Lady gave us toys.  I had Mr Messy I had a book of him and Little Miss Bossy. Sabriye had one  it was called  little Miss Stubborn.  Tayla swapped with Sabriye Tayla had Mr Perfact.  I smelt the scrumptious   popcorn.  We had no food  because the food was  expensive. We sat down on a seat. The Movie  started. Some parts, were so funny that I laughed. When the Movie, was done we ran out. Porter threw his  toy then a little  girl picked it up. She gave it back. I gave her Little Miss Bossy. I felt good. We walked to the car. We felt hungry so we drove  to Domino's  for dinner it was delicious.  When we had finished eating, we took Tayla back home. Then we drove back home and brushed our teeth, read books then off to sleep.

Matariki

The Legend of Matariki

  Long long ago, there were three brothers and four girls. They liked  Matariki because they liked to lie to people. 

One sunny Saturday, they lied to heaps of people, by saying, "We're better then you."  

Havana said happy birthday and she rushed into the fancy kitchen to grab the scrumptious and colourful cake. Nia pulled them by their hair. 

All of the naughty kids said, "Hi!" 

Mr Teddy Bear said, "Seven of you must leave." 

They would do that every day and night. They shouted. Havana had an idea. 

They huddled up then Havana said, "Let's pull his pants,"  so they followed her plan. 

Sabriye said, "However will we do that!" 

"Yeah!" shouted Brylie and Porter. 

Waylon screeched, "I love to bite so you'd better be scared, Teddy Bear." 

He said, "I must warn you." 

Grason said, "Chit chat chit."

Ted left. 

The second day, it was foggy outside. 

Brylie said, "Where is everyone?" 

Right at that moment, a flash of light struck. A net flung onto them. The naughty kids were scared. 

"Don't lie or you will end badly!" yelled Mr Teddy Bear. "Mr Teddy Bear, please don't hurt us!" the poor kids said. He twisted and twisted and threw the seven of them up into the sky. 

"Hooray!" the people cheered. 

All of the villagers said, "Thank you, Mr Teddy Bear." 

He said, "You're welcome." 

That night, they celebrated the day called Matariki. You see them late May and early June.       

July and May

May and July were best brothers. They loved walking in the forest and hearing the birds sing and play in the flowing rivers. They loved to smell the wild flowers.
One beautiful morning July and May told their Mum if they could have a walk. There Mum, said yes but don't get off the path. Okay they said they ran off with excitement. They walked in the forest they heard a buzz! they followed a butterfly then they played in the smashing river. They saw a bird they thought if they followed the bird they would get the eggs for dinner. But when they followed the bird was so fast that they got off the track, it was unfamiliar we are lost said July no were not said May follow me. Okay said July but they were still lost they heard there mum and dad they said May July! they yelled may and July said were over here mum ran and folded them and squeezed them in her arms. Mum asked if they want hot soup and hot chocolate they said yes please. That night they told there mum and dad jokes. July

Pet Day

WALT make up a story about a Pet Day problem.

WWBSWW:

• Begin with an orientation to tell the reader who, did what, where and when.

“Pet Day will be on Friday,” Miss Anderson, Tom’s teacher, announced to the class on Monday. “Bring your pet to school and tell us about it, then we will have a pet parade.”

Tom was so excited. He would be able to bring Harry to school to 

show everyone.

• Write the events leading up to the problem.

At the end of the day, he ran all the way home to get his pet ready for Friday.

He loved Harry and had wanted to show his friends for a long time, but his mum and dad had told him that Harry must never leave the house; but, now, his

teacher had given him permission to bring it to school.

Smilingly, he polished Harry’s green silky skin, talking to it with his friendly voice. “You’re allowed to come to school, Harry. You can meet my friends and my friends can meet you.”

As soon as Friday came around, Harry carefully took Harry out of its cage and placed him into his black backpack. He couldn’t wait to get to school, so he ran

all the way.

When the bell rang, he and the rest of the class stepped into the 

classroom.

• Write the problem.

Tom opened his backpack to show his friends what he had brought to school for Pet Day.

“It’s a green, slippery, slimey …...................” he said slowly. “Snake!” he 

shouted.

“Tom Denver, give me that thing right now!” Miss Anderson 

commanded.

Tom opened his hand to pass it over, but, at that moment, naughty Billy Burton lunged to grab it himself. He bumped Tom’s shoulder and Tom hurtled forward, the snake flying out of his hand to the back of the classroom.

“Eeeeeee! Where is it?” squealed Miss Anderson.

Chaos threatened in Room 4.  Children jumped up and ran around, screeching

their lungs out and pushing over chairs and desks, trying to find Tom’s snake.

• Write the events to tell your readers how the problem was solved.

Tom had an idea. He gathered some things around the class. He got scissors, cords to tie, glue, paper, wire and the teacher’s lunch. He set up the bits and pieces into a trap.

All of the kids ran on their chairs. They started to be quiet and still.

The snake slithered on the carpet and followed the track of the ham sandwich. He nibbled the sandwich.

Tom sneaked. He pulled the cord - bang!

Miss Anderson said, “Never bring that snake!”

“Ok,” said Tom.     

Well done, Brylie.   

-      Can you think of better word than got?

-      Can you think of a better way of telling us how the children got onto their chairs?

-      Begin a new paragraph each time a different character does something.

From Jamling Tenzing

Jamling Tenzing

May 14 at 1:56pm · Namche Bazar, Nepal

To all the children of St. Paul's primary school, greetings from the Himalayas.

I know you have been following John and our journey to the to roof of the world. I hope you learned something about our mountains and culture.

I invite you all to join me one day to visit our part of the world.

hello I'm Brylie  when I'm older i'm going to walk to Mount Everest I've been learning about your journey  and typing on the computer about your journey thank you for inviting us to Mount Everest.

Jamling Tenzing Hi Brylie, I look forward to welcoming you to our country and to see our great Himalayas.

Mount Everest