WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
- where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce
Patrick was a boy was born in a rich family his father was a roman solder. He hated school . One day he was at school learning about santan god but he was nt/ even botherd doing anything so he pretended he wanted go to the toilet but he actuelly walked to the beach prancing along following the pathway he rolled in the smooth sand. He frozed pirates! said the captin they caught girls and boys on abourd said the captin Ireland. They were sold as slaves Patrick had to look if wolves were eating the sheep. night and day he stayed there like 6 years One night when Patrick heared a voice it was god Patrick trusted god was his joy god said go there is a ship waiting for you. Patrick was waiting for this time. he walked he found the ship a crew throwed a rope he climbed up the rope Patrick prayed to god. one night there was a storm and a wave they grounded in francis they tried to find food but they did nt/ then Patrick prayed they ate pork dinner and apple sauce.
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